Sunday 17 January 2016

DRAFTING- By Lauryn and Abi.

Drafting:

After recent feedback of our first rough cut it was said that the ending was unclear (the girl accepting the friend request). It was meant to signify danger as we saw the villain's environment and lifestyle before he send the request along with the music.
To make it more clear to the audience it was said to add more of a narrative approach to the ending.

We thought that we would:

  • Film the actual target walking somewhere
  • Have the stalker watching and following her 
  • Have her walking out of her house (normal)
Here are some shots Taken by Abigayle in Hainault :

We thought that this would make the audience understand the title sequence a little bit more as it was discreet.

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